Audience Feedback On The Rough Cut

We asked class members and family members to watch our music video and write any comments they had on a piece of paper so we could see if there was anything we felt we needed to change as a result of the feedback. Below are several images of some feedback we received:

Overview of feedback:

• we had a range of feedback regarding the time lapses, both positive (very effective) and negative (too long), however all members of our group and our teacher felt that the positive effect the time lapses had on the final product outweighed the negative comments and therefore we decided to leave the time lapses as they were
• people thought that the meaning behind the music video was very powerful and relatable
• the paint was considered a creative representation of a way of portray mental illness
• a lot of people were not keen on having the fact at the end of the rough cut as they felt it was unnecessary and as a result of this we are going to take the fact out of the music video, meaning that the final cut ends on a time lapse of both actors